Power of one SEXXY Paragraph

In English we have been learning about apartheid and we watch the movie 'The Power of One'.
We now had to write a SEXXY paragraph about the movie. Here is what Maddy and I came up with 

Statement:The film technique was used very effectively.

Example:  Geel Piet was standing there with such fear. While Sergeant Borman was standing there with so much confidence.

eXplain: The directors purpose was to show how much power the Afrikaans had over the Black Africans.

eXplanation: It made audience have mixed emotions about it like angry and upset.

Your Link: We don’t have one.